Feedback on my storyboard

After showing my peer feedback group my storyboard I asked them for some things that they liked about it and some things that they would change. 

Here are the things that they liked: 

• 'I like the idea of a montage that goes along with the instrumental for the song at the start' 
• 'I like how the music video is based around the idea of moving on and freedom because it links with the song'
• 'I like the different shots that you would be using'
• 'The idea of you showing her looking lost and confused in the crowd is nice because it could show that she is in a split mind about her relationship and doesn't know what to do' 

Here is what could be improved: 

• 'There are a lot of crowd shots' 
• 'Listen to the lyrics and try to use them as what you could show other than just the similar types of shots'